I'm not killing chapter one...I'm adding to it!
Long story short, I am putting in some background and dialogue to help build my main characters while also adding to my main character's reason for striving for a better way of life.
And my kids are helping me with this one a little bit ;)
Should make for a great addition! Wish I could post some on here, but I'm never quite sure how 'safe' my work would be on the WWW... Maybe I'll publish a sneak peak soon...what do you think?
Thanks! Have a great Friday!